How to Pitch Your Startup - Kevin Hale

Created time
Dec 24, 2022 10:49 AM
Summary
Progress
Done
Category
Startup
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Youtube

Startup Idea

notion image
Problem must to have these characteristics
Problem must to have these characteristics
Solution should not seek for problem. Find problem first.
Solution should not seek for problem. Find problem first.
You’re looking have some unfair advantage called “insight”
You’re looking have some unfair advantage called “insight”

How do I package up my idea and present them to an investor?

Of groups good enough to make it to interviews, more than half blow the application
Probably the biggest thing people don’t understand about the process is the importance of expressing yourself clearly.
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Don’t sell us, we (investors) will sell ourselves

Main questions

  • Do I understand idea?
  • Am I excited by idea?
  • Do I like the team?
But, Just be CLEAR [about your idea].

Be clear

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A clear idea is the foundation for growth
By being clear, it would be shared by the word of mouth.
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Before anyone can remember, they have to understand

How to make it easy to understand?

I make it legible (разборчивый), simple and obvious.
This essay would focus about being legible

Legibility

Legible slides are ones that even old people in the back row with bad eyesight can read.
Similarly, legible ideas can be understood by people who know nothing about your business.
To get:
  • Cofounders
  • Users
  • Investors
  • Employees
  • Shareholders
… you need your idea to be shared quickly and efficiently.
 

Avoid:

  • Ambiguity - something abstract, or understood in two ways
  • Complexity - not mixing a bunch of things in your description
  • Mystery - anything a general public would not understand, such as:
    • Jargon
    • Technical words
    • Anything that is fake (This, that)
  • Ignorable - use of language that people ignore.
    • Marketing style of speak
    • MBA or CEO speak
    • Buzzwords

Be:

  • Conversational - good for word of mouth, usual type of speech
  • No Jargon
  • No Preamble (предыстория)
  • Reproducible (important one) - Can person imagine it? Can people (investors) understand what would it take to create a company? If they can’t, then they can’t ask questions or understand the nuances of the business.

How to make it reproducible

  • What are you making?
  • What is the problem?
  • Who is the customer?

Examples

Too abstract, non-reproducible
Too abstract, non-reproducible
Too much of preambles
Too much of preambles
Concise, descriptive, easy to understand, reproducible and imaginable
Concise, descriptive, easy to understand, reproducible and imaginable
Refreshing, no pretense (притворство)
Refreshing, no pretense (притворство)
Creates foundation for curiosity
Creates foundation for curiosity
Doesn’t perfectly connect to what sort they’re making, but they’re intrigued. And it is connected LinkedIn.
Doesn’t perfectly connect to what sort they’re making, but they’re intrigued. And it is connected LinkedIn.
People do not need understand How you would do in description

X for Y

Like: LinkedIn for whatever
X for Y is OK, but many people abuse it wrong

Should I use X for Y?

  • X is household name? You need to use known, billion-dollar company
  • Does Y want X? Why the target need the X model?
  • Y should be a huge market

What doesn’t work?

  • Buffer for Snapchat → smaller than snapchat

Summary for

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Lead with what. Not why or how
It’s hard to focus intently on over 1000 application even if it’s your job. So be concise. Make the time I spend on your idea efficient.

Be concise

use as few words as possible
The concision give the information about you as a team.
  1. You have thought deeply about your idea. Because you thought so deeply about and because you’ve practiced talking about it so much and you’ve gotten really good at getting people excited and understanding really quickly, you probably have figured out how to do it in a short amount of time.
  1. You are efficient. You are efficient with your words, you’re probably efficient with your thoughts and actions.

Bad examples

No idea who the customer is, what they are doing, how they would do it.
No idea who the customer is, what they are doing, how they would do it.
Same as above
Same as above
Sounds like a mission, hard to know what the product is. Non-reproducible.
Sounds like a mission, hard to know what the product is. Non-reproducible.
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You should not emphasize on Buzzwords

Making it better

  1. Get an idea
    1. notion image
  1. get nouns
    1. notion image
  1. Be careful with verbs and adjectives. Is it giving the maximum punch?
Final version:
notion image
 

Conclusion

The best way to help investors evaluate your idea is to be CLEAR and CONCISE.